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By COREY RUDL,
Entrepreneur.com
We all know that well-written
copy is one of the most effective
methods for getting people's
attention and attracting them
to your product or service,
but the importance of the shortest
copy is often overlooked. A
lot of people don't even realize
that things like their navigation
menus, links or even their newsletter
subscription offers are copy
and require careful consideration.
Ironically, this kind of copy
is one of the most valuable
tools you have. Think about
your.
-Banners
-Classified ads
-Newsletter subscription offers
-Navigation menus
-Links ("click here,"
"buy now")
This sort of copy is typically
asking people to take some sort
of action that is vital to your
business: visit your web site,
request more info, subscribe
to your newsletter, click through,
buy the product. which is why
it requires much more attention
than it tends to receive.
Of course it's more difficult
to get your message across when
you have limited space, but
short copy is the glue that
holds your marketing campaign
together. And if every button
on your menu, every ad, every
link isn't as compelling and
effective as it can be, you're
not going to get the results
you're hoping for, be it more
sales, more subscriptions, more
referrals, etc.
Here are four hard-and-fast
rules of copywriting that must
be followed for even the shortest
of copy to guarantee you always
make the most profitable use
of the little space you have.
Rule #1: You Must Emphasize
Benefits, Not Features
I know, I know, you've heard
this one before. But I so often
see copy--short and long--that
neglects to mention how the
features of a product or service
will benefit customers that
I'm guessing a good number of
you aren't sure what this really
means. So let me clarify for
you.
A feature is one of the components
or functions of your product
or service. For example, if
your toothbrushes come packaged
with glow-in-the-dark toothpaste,
that's a feature--not a benefit.
A benefit is something your
product or service will do for
your buyer to somehow offer
a solution to a problem. So
if your toothbrushes that come
with glow-in-the-dark toothpaste
make stubborn kids thrilled
to brush their teeth before
they go to bed, then you've
got yourself a benefit!
Are you following me? An online
real estate agent advertising
"real-time mortgage calculations"
is advertising a feature of
her site; however, if she writes,
"Avoid wasting time haggling
at the bank with my real-time
mortgage calculator," then
she's advertising a benefit.
Emphasizing benefits is the
number-one most overlooked rule
of copywriting, and this lack
of emphasis is one of the top
reasons advertising falls flat.
Short copy is no exception--and
you don't need a lot of room
to do it right.
Let's take a look at a short
classified ad. If you posted
an ad that read.
Real estate on the Internet.
Plenty of listings.
Shop at your convenience.
.you probably wouldn't get
the greatest response. The ad
is brief and to the point, but
it lacks clarity. First of all,
what kind of property is being
advertised? Are the listings
for commercial buildings or
family homes? What part of the
world does the ad refer to?
How many listings is "plenty"?
How do we get to see these listings?
And, most important, how does
this service benefit me?
There's a vague reference to
the benefit of "convenience"
in this ad--but it's not really
explained. Let's dress it up
a bit:
Take a Personal Tour of 375+
of Seattle's Hottest,
Most Affordable Single-Family
Homes
Skip the hassles of house hunting
when you search our HUGE online
database of single-family homes:
375+ homes with pictures, video
tours and detailed descriptions!
Search by price, location, number
of bedrooms,
number of bathrooms and more!
Get FREE local school reports,
neighborhood
information and mortgage calculations!
Click here now to begin searching
our online database of Seattle's
hottest, most affordable family
homes--without leaving your
computer!
This version expands on the
benefit of convenience and details
the different ways this convenience
offers solutions to the house-hunter's
problems. So the benefits we're
clarifying for the reader are:
-House hunting is a hassle
and now you can avoid it.
-Physically going to see 375
homes would be practically impossible,
but you can easily do it online.
-You can search the database
by very specific criteria to
effortlessly find exactly what
you want.
-Plus you'll get free reports
that detail all the information
you'll want to know about a
new home and neighborhood that
you wouldn't get even if you
went there in person.
Also note that this ad targets
a specific niche: single-family
homebuyers in the Seattle area.
Targeting your advertising is
the only way to get your benefits
in front of your best potential
customers, as we'll discover
in the next section.
Rule #2: You Must Write to
a Targeted Audience
The fact is, your product or
service is not going to appeal
to everyone. And if you try
to market it to everyone, you'll
wind up with far fewer sales
than if you choose a select
group to direct your copy to.
So once you've defined your
target market, you need to turn
your attention toward making
sure your copy addresses them
directly.
For example, let's look at
pay-per-click advertising. Let's
say you bid 17 cents per click
in Overture.com for the key
phrase "single-family homes."
Because you pay every time someone
clicks through this link, whether
they purchase from you or not,
you want to make sure that your
ad carefully targets your best
potential customers.
Given that you're targeting
single-family homebuyers in
the Seattle area, you'd want
to make sure your ad includes
this vital piece of information.
That way, you can be sure you
won't waste money on people
searching for single-family
homes in San Diego! And if you
bid 41 cents per click for the
key phrase "Seattle homes,"
you'd want to make sure to write
an ad that clearly states that
your site features single-family
homes so you don't waste your
advertising dollars on condo-seekers
or recreational property buyers.
By writing a separate ad for
each of your keywords that carefully
targets your market, you'll
ensure that you attract the
most buyers for the least cost.
Of course, if you're writing
copy for banner ads, your approach
will need to be a bit different.
Whether you're purchasing blocks
of impressions (i.e. you pay
a set dollar amount for your
banner to be displayed 1,000...
10,000... etc. times on other
Web sites) or participating
in a banner exchange (i.e. you're
trading banner impressions with
a network of other site owners),
you've paid for your advertising
up front, so you'll want to
do everything you can to attract
viewers' attention and persuade
them to click through to your
site. And this means you'll
want your ad copy to be a bit
more general, to ensure it attracts
the highest number of click-throughs.
The title of the above classified
ad would make a great banner
because you're targeting your
best potential customers:
Take a Personal Tour of 375+
of Seattle's Hottest,
Most Affordable Single-Family
Homes!
Click here now...
But you might also try testing
banners with more general copy
that read something like this:
Search a HUGE online database
of 375+ Seattle Dream Homes
and skip the house-hunting headaches!
Click here now...
The first ad is going to attract
the most qualified audience--those
people looking for a single-family
home in Seattle for a reasonable
price. The second version, however,
will attract a slightly broader
audience. Still in Seattle and
still looking for homes, this
group is not necessarily looking
for a single-family dwelling
and they're not necessarily
worried about price. They're
just checking out homes in the
Seattle area, and they're attracted
by the size and convenience
of the online database.
While the first ad may generate
a higher visitor-to-sale conversion
rate (the percentage of people
clicking through who then sign
up for the service) because
it's more specific, the second
ad will probably solicit more
total click-throughs because
it has a more general appeal.
You'd have to test to see which
version would pull the most
sign-ups altogether.
Rule #3: You Must Include a
Call to Action
Okay, that's easy enough. BUY
NOW! There's a call to action.
But hold on a minute. If it
were that simple, everyone marketing
online would be rich, and every
online shopper would have to
move into a bigger home to accommodate
all that happily purchased stuff.
There are two very important
things that you must include
in your call to action:
You must determine exactly
what action you want people
to take,
--and--
You must provide a reason why
people should take that action.
Isn't "Buy now" exactly
the action you want? Not necessarily.
Think about what exactly it
is that you're trying to do.
Are you trying to generate leads?
Do you want people to sign up
for your free newsletter? Are
you trying to attract a specific
audience and hoping to convert
as many of those people as possible
into sales?
It's important to understand
that all copy, if possible,
should contain a call to action
that clearly identifies what
action is desired. I can't emphasize
this enough. Think about the
buttons on your site menu. Each
one is a call to action. And
they're all very important.
If they're not as direct as
possible, telling visitors specifically
what to do, they'll be useless.
For example, if you have a
button labeled "Sales,"
you're doing nothing but confusing
your visitors, leaving them
guessing whether you're referring
to product sales (i.e., online
ordering), products that are
on sale (i.e., specials or discounts),
or maybe the opportunity to
sell your product (i.e., merchandising
opportunities). But your visitors
won't guess for long--why would
they bother? They'll just leave
your site.
If you change the button copy
from "sales" to "order
online," you're now asking
visitors to take an action--to
order your product. This clarifies
the purpose of the button and
tells the visitor what to do
to get your product. Another
example: Instead of writing
"E-mail," you could
ask visitors to "Contact
Us." Again, you're asking
visitors to take a specific
action.
Of course, you won't always
be able to include a call to
action in every button; you
won't always have the space.
Your best bet in this case is
to be as clear as possible.
For example, it would be difficult
to include a call to action
in a button of your navigation
menu that leads to your newsletter
back issues. There would not
be room to say "Click here
now to read our newsletter back
issues." So in this case,
you'd just want to make sure
your copy is clear. Label the
button "Newsletter Back
Issues" instead of "More"
or "Old Stuff."
Now let's think about your
links. Supposing "Buy now"
is the action you want. You
have to give people a reason
to buy. Huge, garishly colored
words on a screen won't do the
trick; added benefits will.
And in your links, you have
a little more room to move.
The call to action should remain
the central focus of the link,
but pack in as many benefits
as possible around it. Something
like this will win out every
time over "Buy now":
"Click here now to claim
your 'Golfer's Guide to the
Green' and instantly receive
the downloadable video that
features up-close-and-personal
interviews with pro golfers
who reveal their hottest golfing
secrets, guaranteed to improve
your game in 2 weeks or your
money back!"
Rule #4: You Must Pay Attention
to Layout
Making the most of your layout
is especially important when
you're writing short copy. The
right blend of emphasis and
information is the best way
to attract viewers. Don't underestimate
the effectiveness of bolding,
italics, underlining, color
and white space. But don't overdo
it either.
For example, an offer to subscribe
to your newsletter must be brief,
compelling and effective. It
will certainly not be the main
feature of your Web page, so
it must be attractive enough
to grab the attention of a distracted
reader. But it also needs to
remain readable and informative,
without a gross misuse of formatting
tricks. If your ad has too much
going on in it, it will look
unattractive, unappealing and
unprofessional--and the clutter
will detract from the meaning
of your message.
On the other hand, too little
emphasis leaves you in danger
of never catching anyone's eye.
If your ad is totally boring,
no one will ever even see it--and
if they somehow do, they probably
won't look at it long enough
to find out what it's about.
So let's try to find a happy
medium, emphasizing without
crowding:
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Catchy, effective and professional
in appearance, this version
draws your attention and doesn't
distract you from the information
it contains once you're there.
The ad is clearly laid out and
easy to read. The title is underlined
and in blue, as is the link.
(This is the standard way to
handle links, and it lets the
viewers know they can link to
the sign-up page from either
place.) Giving readers two chances
to link through to your sign-up
will always work better than
one.
I've used only subtle formatting
tricks to provide emphasis while
keeping the ad visually appealing.
The title of the newsletter
is in quotation marks to give
it additional emphasis. The
main features of the newsletter--what
you'll learn from the experts--are
emphasized by the use of bullet
points and a nice amount of
white space. And the main benefits
of the newsletter--reduce your
expenses and dramatically increase
your annual income--are italicized
and strategically placed right
before the call to action.
Because the call to action
comes at the end of the ad,
it is supported by all that
came before it. And because
it is the last bit of text and
it is in blue, the viewer's
eye is effectively drawn through
the ad after being attracted
by the title.
Of course, some of the formatting
techniques discussed here are
available only to people formatting
their ads in HTML. Obviously,
you have more options in HTML
and can do pretty much whatever
you like. But in a text format,
you don't have the choice of
adding color, bold, italics,
etc. You do, however, have the
ability to use characters, spacing,
capitalization and indentation
for effect.
So if we had to format our
ad in text, it might look like
this:
======================================
"FREE Subscription to 'Potato
Farmer's' Newsletter"
Subscribe today, and on the
first Tuesday of each month,
you'll receive tips and strategies
from INDUSTRY LEADERS who'll
reveal...
-Secrets for selling your crops
for the HIGHEST PROFITS!
-Tricks for cutting down the
time you spend in the field!
-Cost-effective strategies for
TRIPLING YOUR CROP YIELD!
Plus much, much more!
Each issue contains tons of
easy-to-implement techniques,
guaranteed to
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while dramatically
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Because we don't have the option
of hyperlinking the text, effectively
highlighting it in blue, I've
moved the capitalized "FREE"
to the beginning of the title
to attract attention. I've also
enclosed the headline in quotation
marks for emphasis and put the
newsletter title in single quotes
(which should always be used
inside double quotes). I've
capitalized the benefits that
were italicized in the HTML
version and added a few more
benefits to make the ad as eye-catching
as possible. The general rule
in text is to capitalize whatever
you would have bolded or italicized
in HTML, but be careful with
your use of caps--they're difficult
to read if used excessively.
Final Thoughts
So now that you know the secrets
of fitting high-impact copy
into small spaces, I'll let
you in on another little secret
. . . there's a lot more to
learn! However, now that you
have some of the basics under
your belt, you should be able
to start making dramatic improvements
to your short copy . . . improvements
that will attract a much bigger
response and increased sales.
If all your copy is written
with the rules of benefits,
audience, calls to action and
layout in mind, you simply can't
lose.
And remember: No amount of
copy is so small that it can
be overlooked. Every link, button,
banner and classified ad is
either making or breaking your
marketing campaign as we speak.
Editor's Note: This article
originally appeared on Entrepreneur.com
as "Writing High-Impact
Copy for Your Site."
Corey Rudl is known to many
as an Internet marketing expert
because what he offers are not
theoretical approaches to online
marketing but real examples
of what works when it comes
to marketing a business over
the Internet. He is the author
of Insider Secrets to Marketing
Your Business on the Internet.
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